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Reading Reviews for The One He Never Expected...
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Review #1, by Amanda Ch. 6: Second Time is the Charm...

13th October 2017:
I truly enjoy the concept of the story. Truly. However, it is beginning to grate on my nerves that Jo is a Mary Sue to the nth degree. She has no flaws. She's perfect. Voldemort wants her, even though they have opposing views on everything. Unless you plan on changing canon for the purpose of the story (Which is the only way I could envision your plot working), then Jo would be dead by now.

Author's Response: Hi! Thank you so much for your review! I truly appreciate it and trust me, I know exactly what you mean and where you're coming from! There are times when I, myself, am like "damn i need to tarnish her, and fast!" hahaha!

There will come a point in time when she will not be able to sit on the fence as she does anymore.

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