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4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by EmmyBacon Chapter Seven - Hogsmeade

18th November 2017:
Hey,
Just started reading the story and I'm really into it. I like the love hate relationship between her and Sirius and the complexity of the other relationships she's either holding onto or just developing. Really nice job.
I can't wait to read some more.
Em

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Review #2, by prongslittleflower Chapter Six - The Bet

23rd September 2017:
I loved the update! Looking forward to seeing how this detention bet between Sirius and Brooke turns out. I have a little inkling that sooner or later they're going to realize all their bickering is actually fancying ;)

Author's Response: Thank you :)

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Review #3, by prongslittleflower Chapter Five - Detention

8th August 2017:
I've really enjoyed these last few chapters! I like how Sirius and Brooke are trying to help each other out...seems like maybe we might get a little Sirius/Brooke action in the future maybe? *hopes* but on a different note, I like how you've portrayed James in this story. It's nice to see our favorite Head Boy with a sensitive side. Looking forward to seeing how everything works out! Update soon! :)

Author's Response: Ahh!! I've just seen this. Thanks so much. I'm just waiting on something to get validated then will be posting the next chapter of this story. I already have the next 10 chapters written so I will aim to put one up a week :)

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Review #4, by prongslittleflower Chapter One - Going Home

8th August 2017:
I'm super interested to see where this story goes! I'll leave a longer review at the end but for now, I'm really liking it so far!

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