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Review #1, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap No Longer Mine

6th April 2017:
Let me start off by saying I love Blaise. For some reason I have this attachment to his character and no one ever writes him enough. I'm so sad that he's sad and heartbroken here. I could feel his pain and disappointed! Don't get me started on Luna. I understand having to choose between two people but there's always one that you love more and it's obvious she loved Ginny more. I mean, she wouldn't have chosen her so her excuse was such a cop out. Maybe she was trying to make him feel better but it just made me feel worse. I wouldn't be able to do it. To see my ex, someone I loved or love, get married. To watch them walk down the aisle together, take a vow, and then kiss and be in this purely blissful state. Uh, Blaise! There's someone out there for you! Uh, so sad but I loved it! It was short but in 900 words you really were able to capture his pain and heartbreak for a relationship that clearly did mean a lot more to him than it did to her.

And to be friends? I just think that's plain insulting and I know Luna isn't a mean person. She could never be a vengeful character but that really is just plain mean. Could they be friends? No! Not even if he gets a wife of his own. She would just remind me of someone that crushed my entire world, destroyed all of my hopes and dreams even though there are better ones in the near future (hopefully).

Great job!

Author's Response: Hello! I'm so glad you liked Blaise. I agree that there really aren't enough fics of him out there, and he has an interesting background too. And I was experimenting with more small shots in this story, rather than just one whole big part.

Aw, Luna could never be mean to anyone. In my head, she would have genuinely wanted to stay friends, partly because she felt guilty but also because she's just Luna. But I know that she could be more understanding towards Blaise. (I was so depressed when writing about him)

Thanks for the lovely review! (Also, 1st place for the cooking challenge? Thank you!!!) :D

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