5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Potterhead1994 You Want Me To Be What?

29th April 2017:
You're doing a good job. I love Cecily and how we are getting to know her as a person:)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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Review #2, by shewhomustnotbenamed_ You Want Me To Be What?

27th April 2017:
Really enjoying it.
Keep going :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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Review #3, by shewhomustnotbenamed_ Lectures and Letters

4th April 2017:
Yas an Oliver fic. There simply isn't enough of them.
Enjoying it so far, interested in their past. I also like that you've included Charlie and bill!
Also how can anyone not like Fred. He is bae.

Good chapter. Keep going!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! And I agree...there are definitely not enough Oliver fics out there.

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Review #4, by Dinthemidwest Lectures and Letters

4th April 2017:
You're off to a good start-I like the Gred & Forge duo kidding with Cecily! Very interesting !

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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Review #5, by magnifique11 Begin Again

28th March 2017:
Hello! I'm a new reader! So I have no idea how it was previously but as someone currently revising her old stories/making them better, I applaud you! And I really enjoyed this first chapter!

I think my favorite line was: “You wouldn’t know pretty if it hit you over the head with your own broomstick, Wood.” YEah, that was definitely it lol but I also found your portrayal of Fred & George spot on and all of their dialogue was fantastic, so well done! :)

I'm such a sucker for the "I hate you/I love you" kind of romantic set-up, so I'm already enjoying the tension you've created between Oliver and Cee. Go figure lol. Plus Oliver is one of my favorite underrated characters, (as well as Charlie - so A+ for having both of them mentioned in the same chapter!) so I'll pretty much read and enjoy anything with him in it. It helps that your writing is really nice on top of that though.

So overall I'm glad to be here reading and I'm really excited to see where you take the story!



Author's Response: Julie! Thank you so much for this thoughtful response. I'm super excited to revise and keep posting new chapters. I hope the upcoming chapters are worth a read as well. Thanks so much!

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