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Review #1, by Hasane Conquest

11th April 2017:
I absolutely loved the description for this story, it was really clever!

It was a really short first chapter, but I could already tell that the coming chapters will be laugh-worthy and comedic. It's a really great beginning, and I loved how you began with something familiar to all of us.

I await the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hi! I'm so happy you liked the start of this story, and I do hope you stick around! (I'll also be editing more into this first chapter, in hindsight I must agree with you that it is a tad short haha) - thanks for reviewing!

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