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Reading Reviews for Twenty Eight Turns
  
7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by alexaemd123 Diagon Alley

20th November 2017:
So far, I am completely in love with this story! I love Mina and James' relationship and I am beyond excited for their Hogwarts journey! In the beginning, I thought it was a little rushed and weird that James' parents were so open to her, but now I feel like their relationship is fluid and a real family. I loved the Potters before, but now for some reason Mina completes the family. In the description, it said that it is going to be a romance story.. so i'm guessing you plan on having Hermione literally grow up with the marauders and she ends up with Sirius?!?! That sounds like a great story plot! This should be an amazing story! So I only have one small request.. so natuarally its kinda major. I don't know how I feel about Hermione being in Ravenclaw. She will never be around James and Sirius! Isn't the whole purpose of her being there in that time, to be closer to them and some how save them? If she's in a completely different house, how will she grow a bond with Lily or Sirius or Remus or Peter? I know this is obviously your story but I was just curious on how you will play that out. Other than that, I'm so freaking pumped for Hermione and Sirius' romance!

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Review #2, by PendleWizard Chapter 4: Birthdays

12th October 2017:
A hugely entertaining chapter. I loved the little scene between Bella and Mina, with the hissed death threat and then acting as if they'd been swapping pleasantries. Something tells me Bellaxtrix has just met her match!

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Review #3, by td Chapter 3: Sisterhood

29th July 2017:
I love this story!! Please write more..

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Review #4, by Meg Chapter 3: Sisterhood

12th July 2017:
This is really really good, I sincerely hope that you plan on writing more it is a good story and I would like to hear more of it!!

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Review #5, by PendleWizard Chapter 3: Sisterhood

27th May 2017:
I'm greatly enjoying this. I especially like the idea that Mina is going to get back to 1998 by aging rather than time-travel and I'm looking forward to seeing how that develops.

I'm not sure I'd relish being 10 again!

Is James adopted, too?

One small point: The Euro didn't exist in 1970 - France used the Franc.

Author's Response: I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far! I don't think many of us would want to relive puberty, but I think she would have a bit more reason to than we would.
James isn't adopted, he was born to Euphemia and Fleamont, but the Seer predicted the twins because she could see them at 11 where they were blood relatives.
Thank you for pointing that out! I'll make sure to fix that. I probably wouldn't be able to update the corrections on this site for a while.
I hope you have a lovely day! Sorry for the late reply.


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Review #6, by Kelly Chapter 2

19th February 2017:
This is really good. Can't wait to read more! Keep it up :)

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Review #7, by GeekMom13 Chapter 1: The Beginning

12th February 2017:
Excellent start! I love your writing and look forward to this story

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