Reading Reviews for The holiday fiasco
2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Siriusly21 Orange

3rd December 2016:
This seems like an interesting and funny story. I feel like I've barely gotten into it and maybe the first two chapters could've been combined, but I'm excited to see where the story goes. I'm a bit confused on whether they're actually moving or if they're just changing the vacation spot. The conflict seems a bit weak if they're simply going for vacation. And if they're moving permanently, why would the whole family be moving?

Anyways, I'll continue reading now and see if we get a bit more into the plot next chapter.

Author's Response: Well, since you are a bit confused, I will ask you to wait for next chapter. It may answer your questions. :)

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Review #2, by Ohpl Orange

2nd December 2016:
Great start. Looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thanks. Glad you liked it. I will be uploading soon.

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