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Review #1, by GryffindorandProudofIt The Day My Last Robes Caught on Fire

7th August 2016:
I'm really liking this story so far! Off to a great start! I really like the idea of focusing on Seamus and Lavender's kids, rather than just focusing on the Golden Trio's or Draco's, like most next gen fanfics seem to do. It's nice that Lavender is alive (that scene in the DH movie was sad beyond belief :( ) I also liked how you made Halle prone to catching things on fire like her dad. I laughed so hard at the howler scene, thinking of Molly Weasley in COS.
I liked the sister rivalry between Halle and her friendship with Lucy Weasley. Great job so far!
-GryffindorandProudofIt :)

Author's Response: Thank you! To be honest, I always thought that Seamus and Lavender would end up together, and I was beyond sad when she died. :( I suppose the way the story is going, in a few chapters most of the plot will be revealed. Again, thank you for reading and reviewing!


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Review #2, by Violet Potter 434 Detentions with Lucy Weasley

8th July 2016:
YAY 50 reads!

some people really don't see how important things like that are to newbies like you and me


not that i'm THAT new but I write like it

I love this so far!

I read the other chapter the other day but I was logged out and yeah stuff

so I'm here now to review them both

hi! i'm slightly hyper

this is looking like a good plot and i'm wondering where it will go

(my first guess-incase i'm right and in a few months no one believes me- she falls in love with albus, or he likes her, and at Christmas theres some big problemo, oh and the big sister's a pain... at Christmas and most other times... oh maybe she'll be nice some time..) okay that was mostly jibberish but hey ho


yeah should be good

and I cant wait for more

from the delightfully me! xx

ps. once you've written more maybe one day can u check out my story(s)(I think theres two... I've been logged out a long time) I'm at a bit of a pause (eg. I have no idea what to wirte!)
bye again xx

Author's Response: thank you for the review! although your theory doesn't exactly happen, Halle and Al are best friends set for life and all that jazz.

Did I literally just say all that jazz.

Oh dear.

Also, of course I'll check out your stories!

Thanks again!!


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