Reading Reviews for Broom cupboard #2
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Review #1, by Albus Fan -

15th June 2016:
This was a very good story. It was short and sweet. I feel like there's a whole backstory that you could explore though. Albus waiting all summer. Alice waiting for Albus to make a move. James getting them into trouble in earlier years. Maybe you could consider expanding this story from a one shot into a novel?? I'd be really curious to read all of the backstories and to see what happens next. Also, if Alice is Neville's daughter (Alice Longbottem) that just gives more dimensions to this story. But overall, I really liked this one shot!!

Author's Response: Hi!! Thank you for reviewing!!
I was hoping someone would say what you did, I've got a next gen WIP right now but I really enjoyed writing about these two and I definitely think I could make it a longer story if people want that! And yes Alice is Neville's daughter!
I'm really glad you liked it, thanks again!

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