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Review #1, by The Person Chapter 1

23rd May 2017:
This is not very long which I personally like in a story. And I would also like a little more Romione action.

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Review #2, by GoGoWeasleyPants Chapter 1

21st October 2016:
Hi, I don't usually leave reviews but... Congratulations on posting your first story! It's a lovely one-shot, I thought it a nicely-paced stand alone that adds to canon by providing a unique back story. Your dialogue is also well thought out and character appropriate. I'm a little bit of a grammar nerd and so the only thing I would suggest is that you might want to add some punctuation in and around the dialogue. Look at the books for guidance, when someone is talking, they use commas and full sentences. When you end a bit of quoted dialogue, use punctuation (.,?!) inside the "quotes." Then start a new sentence outside, with capitalization (see how I did that there?) Anyway, I'm really looking forward to seeing what you do next, I think you really 'get' the canon characters and I love your description here of why the scent of fresh mown grass makes Hermione blush! Please keep writing and sharing!

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Review #3, by Avanell 2 Chapter 1

22nd May 2016:
very cute short story~thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you so much if you have any constructive criticism I would be happy to hear
(This is my first fanfic)

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