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Reading Reviews for Sweet Madness
  
2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by alicia and anne Cauldrons and Cheese

23rd May 2016:
:O Stay away from Wormtail! Good on you for not wanting to say anything Peter. Wait... is Remus the other one? Or is that someone else drooling?

I am not liking what Snape and Bertram are doing to them. Such slimey snakes!

Severus does love to be dramatic, doesn't he? Heheh he has a smoke ball too to make it even better!

Phew the other guy wasn't Remus, that's good.

I hope that they make Severus pay though, he deserves to be punished!

I love that Sirius has eaten most of the food :D To be fair I would have done the same... and I totally blame Remus for helping Sirius get that chocolate eaten.

Hahahah dance of death

Those two are hilarious! :D

I can't wait to read the next chapter soon! :D hilarious start to the story :D

Author's Response: congratulations on finishing your review-a-thon and thank you for the review!

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Review #2, by Gabriella Hunter Cauldrons and Cheese

11th May 2016:
Hello!

This is Gabbie from the forums here with your review for our angry swap!

I love reading stories that feature Snape and the Marauders battling it out. I don't know why but I always think they're really funny and I was wondering just what sort of story I was reading here.

Comedy? Drama? Horror? Hahaha. I like this dark opening though because we really don't get a clear idea of what's going on. We slowly grasp that it's not quite what we think and I really liked your Severus. He seems to be snarky and mean enough to scare children already but he's such a jerk for doing that to Wormtail.

I do wonder what he's up to though with that potion and who he's going to give it to next.

I'm actually kind of nervous about it...

I never write the Marauders and I'm not sure why that is but I feel like you all write them so much better than me. I enjoyed the mix of personalities here too, I got such a clear idea of who James and the others were.

The dialogue was witty and sharp as well, there wasn't need for much description in between and I laughed throughout the whole thing. Curious to meet Lily and see how the others react to James's obvious crush on her too.

But now Wormtail is back and not only does he seem to like Cheddar more than he should, he's not quite himself. What exactly is going to happen? Hahaha. The others must be used to this sort of thing because they didn't seem surprised but I'm not sure if that's a good thing or not.

Hahaha.

Thanks for the read!

Much love,

Gabbie

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