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Reading Reviews for La Vie En Bleu
  
3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by RedHairGinny Gorgeous Baby Blues

7th May 2016:
Ahh this was really good to read.
And now I find myself shipping them too! :D

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!

As a writer, I'm glad I've converted you to the ship;)

-dysfunctional


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Review #2, by Pookha Gorgeous Baby Blues

11th April 2016:
Well, while it may be plot light, it's fine. A one-shot can be a snippet of a story, or just a snapshot of a moment, like this one is.

I like the characterization of Charlie quite a bit and I like him being a bit of a playa even though he says he isn't. I also like Luna's characterization. She's a bit less strange here than normal, but I like that (I specialize in writing Luna, so I understand). She presents as someone who would be open to Charlie's advances, but not in the way he thinks.

A very nice Charlie/Luna story.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review!

Whilst writing this, I found capturing Luna's character difficult. She is strange and unique but at the same time, she is still a teenage girl. I wanted both sides of her to show.

I LOVED writing Charlie. I liked the idea of him being a player but not in a malicious way, in a sort of "justified" sense because of his job.

Again, many thanks for the review! It's greatly appreciated.

~dysfunctional


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Review #3, by Slytherin Eagle Gorgeous Baby Blues

11th April 2016:
I really liked this story but it seemed to end really suddenly and that made me quite sad. Please write some more of this pairing if you ever have the inspiration because it was beautiful.

Lea xx

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! Truthfully, I've fallen in love with writing about this pairing- I've never seen anyone write about them, and it was interesting to explore how their relationship might come about.

As for writing more about them, I definitely think I will once I find the time and the inspiration!

Once again, thank you for the lovely review.

~dysfunctional


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