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Review #1, by Musing Begin Again

20th April 2016:
Hi Bea! I'm here to review your entry for the Taylor Swift Ultimate Challenge.

I am delighted that you chose this challenge to write your first story for. This is such a CUTE story. (My first story was a Jily too and I absolutely adore them ;) )

I liked your interpretation of the song and how you fit it to Severus/Lily/James scenario. The prompt gelled in seamlessly. This was a nice take on the beginning of James and Lily's friendship. I liked the way they started conversing about the potion's task at hand but eventually moved on to different topics. It felt natural. Also James having Muggle friends- headcanon totally accepted! :D

I'd love to read more of your stories in the future. Thank you so much for participating in the challenge and sharing this sweet story with us! Keep Writing!


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Review #2, by princesslily_36 Begin Again

30th March 2016:
Hello, and welcome to the archives!

I saw over at the forums that you had your first story up and decided I'd come over and give it some love, and much to my delight it's a Jily!! (I'm princesslily32 at the forums, and you'll find out soon enough that Jily is my OTP - I live breathe and write Jily all the way)

This was a cute little one-shot, and I kinda hoped at the end of it that you'd continue to expand this story.

I'm glad you shared this with us, and hope to see more from you :) I think you'll find the forums are an amazing place to start and hone your writing skills, and of course make some wonderful friends :) Hope to see you around more.

Good luck with the challenge!


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