Reading Reviews for Lily's Seven Years
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by YourRavenclawLoverGirl Year V

10th December 2016:
Hi! I really like this chapter, and I swear, if I have to leave two reviews myself, I will, and if you don't come up with something in another 4 months, I will personally stalk you and find your dream school and watch you write out the rest of the story if I have to do that to get to the end.


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Review #2, by Grace Year IV

12th July 2016:
I loved this! You should write a 5 th please!!

Author's Response: it's being written right now! i've been focusing on my wattpad stories recently, so sorry about how long it's taken!

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Review #3, by April Year II

6th April 2016:
Hey, how ya doin! Your story is amazing and plese write more. I never considered the concept of James and Lily being best friends before they started dating but now it just fits. Please update again soon.

Author's Response: Hi!
Thanks so much, that means a lot.
I posted a new chapter a few days ago, have you checked it out yet?
At some point I'm going to re-edit this whole story and make it better, so if you have any advice on how to fix it, please let me know!
-Alice (5th year Slytherin)

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Review #4, by adluvshp Year I

28th March 2016:
Hey there =)

This seems like a great start to your story. I like your characterisation of Lily, and the way you're writing out her seven years is interesting. How you introduced her, eased her into the narrative, showed her first meeting with James and the rest of the Marauders, and the sorting etc. was very nicely done. I quite enjoyed reading their interactions. The wrap up at the end of the chapter, giving a sort of overview of the year, was a nice touch. The events felt realistic and your dialogue too was well-written.

Over all, this has a great concept and I'm looking forward to reading more and finding out how you shape things further. Good luck with the rest of the story =) Before I sign off, I'd like to add that I'm here with this review from the HPFF Fundraiser 2016. As you may (or may not) know, the site is hosting a fundraiser to keep it afloat - and every little counts so please do consider donating if you can! Also, the forums are a great place to be a part of our lovely community so do consider joining too.

Angie (Lost Muse)

Operation Green With Envy - Slytherin - R E N C L M

Author's Response: Hey!
Thank you so much for everything you said.
I wrote this story a while ago and at some point I'm going to go back and edit everything, so if you have any criticism in the next chapters I'd really appreciate it.
Bye :)
-Anneliese (backandforth)
5th year Slytherin, Marauder's Era

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