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Review #1, by Avanell 2 Ron and Hermione

11th March 2016:
Very sweet one-shot! Keep writing for sure. :D

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much!!!

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Review #2, by fwoopersong8 Ron and Hermione

10th March 2016:
Hey, Tammy! Just saw your post on the forums. New stories and Romione! Yay!

This is quite cute. I didn't catch any typos or anything technical like that. I think Hermione is pretty in character; it's nice to see her less stressed out. Although this is interesting, because I would have thought that Ron would be more nervous about reuniting than she would be. What you have written doesn't seem unrealistic, though.

So you want to make it better, huh? In that case, I would suggest putting in some more conflict. I felt that Hermione's anxiety about them meeting up was foreshadowing a fight, and I was surprised when nothing came of it. Most stories, even fluffy one-shots, have a little conflict. Yours was Hermione struggling with her anxiety about their relationship, but I thought you had implied that there was going to be an argument or something.

So to sum up...maybe be careful with your foreshadowing? Show that Ron is nervous, too?

You did a good job with this. Welcome to the site and the forums! I'll see you around. :)


Author's Response: Ooh, thank you so much for reviewing my story!!! :D I really really appreciate it! I also like your advice about adding more conflict and I think you're right that there could be a fight somewhere in there. maybe I could add something from Ron's perspective to help. Thank you so so much for the advice!

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