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Review #1, by victoria_anne How it all went down

27th March 2016:
Hello there fellow proud Hufflepuff!

Ooh I do love a missing moments story! Especially one with a Weasley twin!

"Lee has a crush on her the size of Hagrid" - Ha ha I love this! I'm glad he was okay with Fred taking Angelina, though that must have sucked at first, poor Lee!

I love the relationship between Fred and George (I mean, who doesn't?!) but George always has Fred's back, it's very brotherly!

I love how you describe Angelina, too. So beautiful! I got all excited about everybody dressing up! The Yule Ball was great! (Or so I heard, my invitation got lost in the mail...)

I liked Fred's nervousness too, and his first kiss AWW! That whole scene was so SWEET! I LOVE how Angelina took charge - you go gurlfraand!

Such a cute moment you've written here, really well done! The only thing I would say is that the dialogue doesn't have to be in italics, but if that's what you prefer, that's okay too :)

I hope to see more from you on HPFF! We actually have a fundraiser going at the moment, and if you could help by donating, even a little bit, it would be a great help and greatly appreciated!

Love Bianca

*Puff snuggles*

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