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Review #1, by MargaretLane Chapter 1

3rd April 2016:
Just thought I'd take a look at this as it features an Irishman.

I really like the opening. It throws us right into the action and also creates some suspense because we want to know why he's in such a hurry. The way you write it also creates a sense of hurry.

Love the comment about people being spectators in a cruel sport. When people do that crowding around, I always feel like saying, "if you can't DO anything to help, at least get out of the way so somebody else can."

I also really like the way you brought up the argument they'd had. Sometimes things like that can come across as contrived, but Harry's thoughts about it here sound perfectly natural.

Love the reference to him being his next of kin.

And I really like the last line.

As most people on HPFF are probably aware, I'm not a great fan of romance but you wrote this really well.

Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked this, I wrote this in a hurry so that I could get it out for a challenge.

I know, right?! That really annoys me when people do that, I wish that I could say that too!

Thank you so much :D I'm glad that you enjoyed this even if you're not a fan of romance.


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Review #2, by Philip Chapter 1

7th February 2016:
I would love to see more of a Seamus/Harry Pairing in your world. It is a very nice one off, but what about their home life...
This left me wanting more.

Author's Response: I feel like I need to plan a Seamus/Harry novel now. I didn't realise so many people liked them as a pairing.

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Review #3, by Cindy Lou Who Chapter 1

7th December 2015:
Hello there!

I'm Cindy Lou Who, visiting from Who-Ville for a few days. While I'm in this magical place, I was told that I should read a few stories and I stumbled across this one.

I'm not sure who these people are, but they are frankly quite adorable. Even though the two of them are bickering like an old married couple, it's clear that they love each other very much. I mean why else would someone stick their arm up a claw machine for a teddy bear.

While I can understand why Harry is worried, I feel like he's being a bit hard on Seamus. I mean trying to kick him while he's stuck seems a little extreme, but I suppose they're both passionate fellows. I'm glad that Harry got over his anger quickly.

The teddy bear sitting on top of the dresser really gave me the warm fuzzies. It's nice seeing that the two of them have a solid enough bond to get over such a silly incident.

Well, I must really be going. I have to hurry back to Who-Ville and help my mother prepare the Who Hash and Roast Beast.

May you have a pleasant Christmas full of love.

-Cindy Lou Who

Author's Response: Why, hello, Cindy Lou Who! Aww I'm so glad that you think that they're adorable, they do love each other so much and they're so much fun to write.

They are both very passionate people. :P

Thank you so much Cindy Lou Who! Say hi to the Grinch for me!


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Review #4, by TheHeirOfSlytherin Chapter 1

17th November 2015:
Harry... Seamus... Harry and Seamus... HARRY/SEAMUS!!! DO YOU SEE MY EXCITEMENT HERE??? NO. THEN I WILL BE EXCITED HARDER!!! AHHH!!!

I'm fine, I'm calm... or am I?

Dang, Seamus. What you do to make Harry so upset?

...an arcade does not bode well.

...and I'd have kicked him, too. Repeatedly. Even after forgiving him because aw, he got Harry a gift. A BIG, SQUISHY TEDDY BEAR. *hugs them all*

“... well, you came to stay over for the weekend and I haven’t been able to get rid of you,” Harry told him truthfully, causing Seamus to roll his eyes.

“You probably should have mentioned something all those years ago; you know I can’t take subtle hints very well.”

It was Harry’s turn to sigh. “They weren’t subtle. I was telling you to go home.”
- Best... lines... EVER.

THIS WAS SO ADORABLE AND I DONT CARE THAT ITS FOR KYLE. IM KEEPING IT FOREVER!!!

Connor.

Author's Response: I can so see how calm you are, not excited at all :P

Hahah I would have totally kicked him too!

YES! IT WAS ALL FOR A GIFT!

I can totally see it happening like that, and it's totally my Heamus headcanon now... or just general anyone with Harry canon :P

YAY! I'm sure you can share this with Kyle :P


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