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Review #1, by rosiful I

14th October 2015:
Hey! I'm Rosie from the forums and here with your review swap/exchange!

This one shot is really cute, I love a bit of sibling (or in this case cousin) rivalry! I really wasn't sure what to expect when I started reading and I wasn't sure where you'd take it, but the ending is really great! I love that it ties it all together, with Lucy getting her revenge on James by bringing it up at his own wedding! He was warned that she would get back at him, but she sure can hold a grudge!

Now, I kinda went a bit creepy and found out what you exactly got for the challenge (Sorry! I was just really curious.) and James Sirius Potter, Lucy Weasley, Outside, Something important is stolen & Alohomora must not have been easy to put together! I think Alohomra and the mystery box did stick out a little unnaturally to me, but, it does make sense now that I see it was part of the challenge! You actually did an amazing job getting all the elements in there in such a short story!

I don't believe the results have been posted yet, so best of luck!!
I enjoyed reading this story, thanks for sharing.


Author's Response: Thanks Rosie,

I think it's great that you found out what I drew for the challenge (perhaps I should put this in a note on the story?). I'm glad that made it easier to understand.

Thanks for the review, I'm hoping to do some more for you soon.

Lea xx

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