Reading Reviews for The first War
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Review #1, by tmcar1 The finals before the finals

3rd June 2015:
Ok so I totally just binge read this whole serues here and I LOVE IT OMG! I really love the HP books and have been looking for a good story about the mauraders and stuff. This made me so frigin happy. I think it would be really cool if you did a scene where Lily comes to class late and is stuck with James, but every time she raises her hand he gives her a high-five. And then she gets really annoyed, only to fins that James is doing really well with the assignment. Then she sort-of gets along with him until Severus gets annoyed and casts a spell at James. Another really cool scene would be if James and Severus were dueing and somehow Lily got in the middle of it and they bot accidentally hit her with a spell, putting her in the infirmary. Then James and Severus both go and apolligize like a thousand times and promise to not fight, while glairing at each other. then when the two boys leave telling each other that they would still fight but always make sure Lily couldn't get hurt. Wow I wrote a lot... Sorry. Hope you like my ideas!!

Author's Response: Thank you sooo much! I was actually going to leave this story as abondoned, as it seemed like no one was interested in it, but you've just inspired me to keep writing it, so thank you!

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Review #2, by Gryffindor_girl Detention and Tryouts

23rd December 2013:
Can you please update??

Author's Response: Sorry, I only just worked out how to reply to reviews, haha. I haven't updated for a while now, but I will try to be doing it more frequently, thanks for the review! :]

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Review #3, by Just.....a fan Eavesdropping on a serious conversation

14th July 2012:
Love you're a story. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thanks, I really appreciate it!

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Review #4, by Opalpixiechick Getting sorted

15th June 2012:
Love this Chapter and your story over all. :) Keep up the great work.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for all your reviews, I really appreciate them!

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Review #5, by Opalpixiechick Hogwarts

15th June 2012:
I love this story. It fits that Gryffindor was the person who found the hat and it later gives Harry his sword. :) I can't wait to see what happens next. :)

Author's Response: Actually, I think jkr mentioned somewhere that the hat was Gryffindors, but I might be wrong (maybe I just pulled it put of a hat, heheh). Thanks for reviewing! :]

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Review #6, by Opalpixiechick The Platform

15th June 2012:
I love this story so far. I can't wait to see ho you have the guys meet. :)

Author's Response: Thanks! I figured I would get them to meet on the train, rather than in their dorm, so that they were already well acquainted and friendly with each other by the time they reached Hogwarts. Thanks for the review!

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Review #7, by Devin The Platform

11th April 2012:
Interesting story I like it so far keep up the good writing!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I really appreciate it, thanks for first review!

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