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Reading Reviews for The chronicles of Sakora
  
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by magicmuggle01 Chapter 4

8th May 2011:
Another good chaper, but I noticed that you seem to name alot of people in all your chapters. Maybe this has been putting people off getting to the end of each chapter and your not getting any reviews. Some people can find this rather tiresome. And maybe you can be a bit more describtive with the destinations that Sakora has reached. When I read a story I like to picture what is going on and what the destination's are in my mind. Anyway another 9/10 and please update soon. Adding this story to favourites so that I can find it again quite easily.

Author's Response: Thanks for the tip. I appreciate it.

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Review #2, by magicmuggle01 Chapter 3

8th May 2011:
Another good chapter. I take it that Sakora is the Pokemon trainer? And what happened to the Pokemon that the trainer starts off with. I assume that the creature that hatched from the egg is the Pokemon. Another 9/10 and onto the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks. I rewrote my story and took out the poke'mon.

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Review #3, by magicmuggle01 Chapter 2

8th May 2011:
Another good chapter. You have a good imagination. I was wondering what part a guitar had in Sakora's fight with evil. Another 9/10 and now for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Nothing. She just kept it with her. It was very special because it was from AJ.

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Review #4, by magicmuggle01 Chapter 1

8th May 2011:
I like the start that you've done with your first chapter. You have really gone in depth into the family history. I take it that Sakora is Anastasia reincarnated? since she has the same powers as Anastasia did. I will get onto the next chapter and score you 9/10 for this chapter.

Author's Response: You guessed right. But Sakora doesn't find out about her past until the 4th book.

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