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Review #1, by Apoorva Chapter 41 - Stupid French Barbie Doll

20th February 2018:
Thank you sooo so much for updating this story. Please do complete it. I am so glad I never gave up on checking it time to time as we don't get any updates on your updation. Looking forward to the next chapter!!!

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Review #2, by EmmyBacon Chapter 41 - Stupid French Barbie Doll

24th November 2017:
Really awesome story!
I've been binge reading for a few days and i'm really enjoying it!
I'm a Marauders era girl but usually stick with Sirius/OC so really surprised to see me latch on to a Lily/James story. Awesome job.
The plot line builds itself beautifully, you can clearly see each character and how they've developed across the story. I love the relationship between the two. They are so in-tuned.
Thank you so much for writing a brilliant story and I'm looking forward to reading some more in the future.
Em xx

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Review #3, by ronmyfav Chapter 41 - Stupid French Barbie Doll

19th November 2017:
OMG. there is an update to this !!
I read it for the first time very long back and have since been rereading many times because I love this relationship of James and Lily.
I am glad you are back and will look forward to read more of this story :)
But there is a small part of me that doesn't want you to finish the story as we know what the ending is :(
Their 3 encounters with Voldemort are also done.
Anyways I am glad you will be posting more and that there will be lots of little Harry soon!

Take care!

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Review #4, by HarryGinnyLove88 Chapter 41 - Stupid French Barbie Doll

7th October 2017:
Glad you are back...have been waiting so long you to keep writing...

Too bad for Cristina but i hope she and Sirius dont break up...
And Lilys hormones...good thing house is fireproof ☺

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Review #5, by DobbyLover Chapter 26 - Graduation

27th January 2016:
NO NO NO NO NO!!! Her patrons is a DOE! A DOE! A FEMALE DEER! Besides that, though, I really enjoy your fanfic. I've been reading it for a couple days now.

Author's Response: Keep going. Her patronus will shift when she realizes a few things.

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Review #6, by jameslily Surprises Around Every Corner

11th April 2015:
This is the best best best fan fiction I have ever read... The story line is so addictive that I read nonstop for 2 days to complete the 40 parts. But seeing that you have not updated this story for 3 years now disheartens me..

Please please please continue writing.. All the readers would actually be over the moon if and when you update..

Thanks for a beautiful story and hoping that more will come.. :)

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Review #7, by apoorva Surprises Around Every Corner

26th March 2015:
When are you publishing the next chapter...its three years!!

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Review #8, by Navya Surprises Around Every Corner

23rd September 2014:
You went around and changed chapter names, dint you? And edited some stuff again?

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Review #9, by Bill Surprises Around Every Corner

3rd August 2014:
Awesome! Truly awesome! I love how long it was, and the obvious effort you put into it.

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Review #10, by XYZ Surprises Around Every Corner

2nd July 2014:
I am deeply saddened by the abandonment of this story.have been following it for years..If the author is still listening please continue writing.,it was one of the best stories I have ever read!

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Review #11, by Fay Chapter 1 - Head Boy and Girl

1st April 2014:
So after weaving my way through this new webpage, since hpff seems to have taken a sudden interest in food, on this fine day of April 1st, I find that the first two paragraph of the story reads:

"Jelly Evans apparated to platform 9 ¾ at King’s Cross station promptly twenty minutes before the train was due to leave. It felt good to be going back to The Culinary Institute. Not only was it her last year, but she had been made Head Girl. The year was going to be perfect. The Marauders couldn’t bother her now as she would take points away and could give them detention. The Saltimboccas would have to give her some respect so there would be no more constant, condescending comments. The other seventh year Gnocchi girls wouldn’t give her such a hard time either, seeing as she now would be living in the Heads’ Dorm with the Head Boy instead of in their dormitory. They always were on her back because they were jealous that Peanut Butter Pastry only had eyes for her. The other girls could have him for all she cared, if he ever decided to glance their way.

Pastry. Like he even mattered to her. If anything, he had been a thorn in her side since third year— wait, make that first year. Third year was just when he started asking her out. He had annoyed her before that too. Just thinking about him at this moment annoyed her. Even she had to concede he was popular, good-looking, and amazing at quidditch, but seriously, he wasn’t worth it. His personality was enough to make any sensible woman run away screaming. He was arrogant, childish, rude, condescending, pompous, over-confident, cocky... Ok, she could add to this list all night."

I honestly do not know whether to laugh or cry.

PS: My rating is 9/10, simply because whilst the story is written well, I am not a fan of Jelly/Pastry parings. I'm more of a Jelly/Papaya person, myself.

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Review #12, by alexaemd123 Surprises Around Every Corner

30th March 2014:
Awe! I absolutely loved it so much! Please write more!

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Review #13, by alexaemd123 Chapter 21 - Welcome to Miami

21st December 2013:
Hahaha...loved this chapter! And I knew you were going to end with hair color for her. Haha,.I just knew it. Anyways, love this story so freakin much!

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Review #14, by alexaemd123 Chapter 15 - Christmas at Hogwarts

1st December 2013:
wow...she just had a dream about her death! Amazing! love it!!!

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Review #15, by alexaemd123 Chapter 5 - Finally

30th November 2013:
Aw!!! That was so cute! I love this story!

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Review #16, by KT Surprises Around Every Corner

28th November 2013:
I love the story! My absolute favorite. Please please update!!

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Review #17, by Noopur Surprises Around Every Corner

1st November 2013:
Has this story been abandoned? :(:(
:(..Please update

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Review #18, by lovethepotters Surprises Around Every Corner

22nd May 2013:
OMG I LOVE THIS STORY! I've been following this for YEARS! It's so well-written and I love how you created the backstories for James' family! It's so interesting to read - there's never a dull moment!

Even though James and Lily are together for most of the story (sorry for the spolier alert if anyone else reads this review), I love how they're not all lovey-dovey every single minute. I think you've got the balance right with their romance alongside the Marauders' humour and the Wizarding war. It just goes to show how much of a skilled writer you are :)

One of the best fanfics ever! You even inspired me to write a fanfic about James and Lily! Congrats again and keep up the good work, I'm sure JKR would be proud :D Please update soon! xo

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Review #19, by jamiejuhas Surprises Around Every Corner

13th May 2013:
i love the book so far just hoping that there is more chapters to come

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Review #20, by Moody Chapter 26 - Graduation

26th March 2013:
Hey, yeah, great story but, how can I put this? Us over in England, well we don't have graduation ceremonies! Still great story, good plot, all round loving it! You're a great writer

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Review #21, by Noopur Surprises Around Every Corner

21st March 2013:
Please update soon!! waiting eagerly!

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Review #22, by tyson123g Surprises Around Every Corner

4th February 2013:
I hope this doesn't sound like a ending chapter review, but just wanted to share my feelings on it.

So, you might not remember me, as I have just reviewed twice or thrice before only.

Let's see.. I started this reading story when someone had copy - pasted this chapter on Orkut in 2007. Then, I don't know if it was your's or not, but someone with the same a/c name came there and claimed it to be her's and gave the link here.

I started following the series in 2007 only (though I made the a/c in 2008), when I was just 14 and was fresh out of finishing the HP books. But I just didn't want to let go of the HP universe and then I came upon this site, but primarily your story. And I was always a fan of James/Lily pairing, in fact in later years, I gave up on other genres/stories altogether and just kept coming back for this one pairing only. But till now, none of the other James/Lily story had that much of an impact on me, as your story did.

It was 2009, when I was really last active on this site. You got married that year too, if I remember correctly and stopped posting for a while. I guess I kept growing in and out of HP universe as well and I took long gaps in coming back. But whenever I did, your story was the first thing I checked, always.

I guess I am not trying to be sentimental about a story and fan fiction at that too, but I guess I keep failing. But it is hard not to, as this story was also part of my growing up. I started following this story when I was 14 and now I am 20.

I must have read the whole story from start to finish, for maybe 15-20 times by now easily. But it just never gets boring.

I wouldn't tell you to post fast or anything like that, since somewhere deep down, I don't really want it to end. And we all know the ending to this story. I remember asking you in a review if there is any chance of you changing the ending, but you said, you wanted it to be as true as it can be, to the original storyline.

I don't know how many fans are still there, from the time I started, but do remember your story affected all of us.

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Review #23, by Bellanu421 Surprises Around Every Corner

2nd February 2013:
Man, you need to update!
I really love this story. And James and Lily's relationship is everything that I have wanted in mine... Please update soon!

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Review #24, by jamesandlily_forever Surprises Around Every Corner

1st February 2013:
Are you doing the "Thrice defied lord voldemort" thing? I loved how he knew Lily was pregnant before she did.

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Review #25, by Grace3 Surprises Around Every Corner

25th December 2012:
This is a great story! Looking forward to the next chapter :)

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