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Review #1, by EmmyBacon 

7th February 2018:
argh!

The prophecy! Exiting stuff. I like how you've balanced the lightheartedness with drama here. It really did need to happen, leading us into a false sense of security and then, boop, drama!

And Harry's connection too. Very well intertwined. Great job

EmmyBacon xx

Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you like the balance! And I have to admit I'm a little flattered that you felt that false sense of security, haha! I've been working on that balance in the upcoming chapters, so that the structure is set for the later events... I'm so excited to share them with you, and see what you think. I hope to have the tweaking will be done soon, and I'll have a new chapter up soon.

Thanks for all the feedback, Emmy!


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