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Review #1, by EmmyBacon 

6th February 2018:
I really disliked Sirius at the start of this chapter but then loved him again at the end! So many feels!

He was far too over confident at the start after everything that night in the common room but he really understand her and shows his compassion well when needed.

James' reaction was truly brilliant to Avery here.

I can't wait to see what plans we have for the ball 😊

Author's Response: He can be very arrogant!! Haha. All a part of his 'charm'. But hopefully he remains the compassionate Sirius we all love for a bit.

Im trying to make James as brotherly as I can so really hoping it helped get that across.

The ball will be up as soon as I've finished proof reading it.

Thank you so much for your review :) xxx


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