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Review #1, by marauder5 

15th January 2018:
Hi! I just wanted to stop by and check out your stories since you left me such nice reviews for mine!

I really like the idea of writing this time period from Draco's perspective. I always thought that his story was fascinating, and much darker than Harry's. This chapter was a little fast-paced for me, I feel like you could have stayed in each scene for a bit longer. Maybe talk about how terrified Draco must be of Voldemort? And maybe that getting the Dark Mark on his arm really hurts? Something along those lines. But that's just a suggestion! You've got such an interesting setup for a great story here, even though I don't ship Draco and Hermione ;) Haha. Good job so far!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I really value the suggestion, and I'm glad not only Dramione shippers like it. ;)

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Review #2, by HufflepuffHousePride2008 

31st December 2017:
I think the story was great! It would have been better to write: Draco did what his master said (when Voldemort asked for his left arm). I love the way you did your paragraphs and how you wrote ***the next morning*** and ***that night***. I am going to use that too.

Author's Response: Thanks!! i'm so glad you feel that way and like my stories! Also, thanks for the advice about that one part. It helps me a lot and I appreciate people telling me how I could have done better. Thanks!!

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