3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by pink bunny 

9th January 2018:
Doing great with the balance I think! Such a lovely update this time! Of course I can't wait until the next update sure it's going to great!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you think it's balanced well. I'm writing a few chapters ahead right now, and it definitely feels as though some of those are more "filler"-ish chapters, but I think there are some small moments that are important, too, that need to be explored. Balancing those against the drama and the angst and the action is definitely going to be a continued challenge... All while trying to stay true to canon! Good practice for my personal fiction, I know, but a challenge nonetheless! : ) Thanks for being such a wonderful reviewer! xx, Antigone

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Review #2, by pink bunny 

9th January 2018:
Doing great with the balance I think! Such a lovely update this time! Of course I can't wait until the next update sure it's going to great!

Author's Response: Thanks, you! : )

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Review #3, by EmmyBacon 

27th December 2017:
I'm really falling for this story.
I like the juxtaposition and the parallel lives that are being led. The seemingly same but different worlds.
I'm really looking forward to reading more.
I have to say I'm a little confused about the relationship between her and George, I was expecting something to blossom then but all of a sudden have is the flavour of the Month. I'll be interested to see where that goes!
Keep up the good work
Em

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm so happy to hear you're liking the juxtaposition between Evelyn and Elizabeth. They are very different... And I love writing them both!

The story is being rewritten and expanded from an earlier version that I wrote many years ago (that was originally posted on Quizilla), and originally the relationship between Evelyn and George was more front-loaded and developed early on. I wanted to leave it a little more ambiguous as I revised. Without giving too much away, I feel like I can tell you that there is definitely a connection between them but it will take time for Evelyn to reveal whether its just a strong friendship or romantic. I'm getting ready to write a scene between the two of them, and I think it will definitely help clarify a few things!

You'll have to let me know what you think as it continues to develop!

- Antigone


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