7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Mballa35 

5th February 2018:
Next chapter!?


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Review #2, by Chris 

4th January 2018:
Hi have you got and update on when your going to post chapter 13 Iím enjoying this story

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Review #3, by Alex 

27th December 2017:
Hi, I really like your Albus stories. I have read all of them. I just wanted to re read them and discovered that there is a new one up. Thank you for that, also the last update was a while ago. I hope you will still update this. I know Matt's story got an ending already, but I really would like to see how the last year of school went for all of them.

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Review #4, by Heather 

15th December 2017:
You are the most incredible FanFiction writer I have ever come across. Thank you so much for dedicating so much time and effort to such amazing stories. I just finished every single one you have ever written and thoroughly enjoyed them. I have no idea what to read next because I bet they won't be as good hahah. THANK YOU!

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Review #5, by Gryffindor 

18th November 2017:
Once again, excellent work! Those moments with just Albus and Matt are the best, even though they usually only happen when Matt is having a hard time. ): But then again, Albus is Matt's best friend after all. Good luck with NaNo!

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Review #6, by MargaretLane 

1st November 2017:
I really like the way you show things like the applications procedure for various careers and the benefits available in the wizarding world. Sounds like it's not that easy to qualify for disability there, which doesn't surprise me.

And I also think it makes a lot of sense that the war would have an impact on how seriously mental health problems were taken.

I can DEFINITELY understand why Matt wouldn't want Rose there. Even with the best intentions, and I'm sure she would have the best intentions, it is the career she is aiming for and she is bound to take advantage of the opportunity to try and learn something, which sort of conflicts with attending as a friend to support Matt. It could make him feel sort of like a guinea pig in her training.

Yeah, it's not really surprising that Elsie might need a bit of support. I think it's a little more surprising that she would access it, particularly that she would be allowed access it. I would sort of have expected her family both to be the sort that saw mental health problems as a sign of some kind of weakness and also to fear things like counselling in case she let something slip about their activities. I suspect this therapy group could get interesting.

And that must be a little uncomfortable for Albus - to have people wondering why he is there. Not as bad as if he really were there because of a mental health problem but still awkward.

If Izzy IS Meg's sister, then I wonder if her panic attacks are anything to do with the issues in her family.

Poor Elsie. She seems quite uncomfortable too.

LOVE the expression "cauldron of fish". To be honest, I think it makes more sense than "kettle of fish."

Yikes, having a recruiter come to watch you play like that must be terrifying. At least while doing exams, you don't have somebody standing there watching you. Somebody will eventually correct the exams, of course, but you don't have to see the person who will do it.

Hope the match goes well for John.

Best of luck with Nano.

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Review #7, by Ngayonatkailanman 

31st October 2017:
What is NaNoWriMo? I am going to miss your updates. I am rather hoping that R enrgade wii come out of hiatus. . Anyway,excellent storyline and use of multiple characters with their very own nuances. Well done, you!

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