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Review #1, by Avanell 2 

9th December 2017:
This looks intriguing, with a lot of thought put into it, but the long chapters...yikes! Maybe break them up a little more, if possible. Will read some tonight for sure!

Author's Response: Hi Avanell,

Thank you for your review. The story is only 10 chapters long in total, and some are a bit shorter. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. Have an awesome day.

Best wishes,

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