2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by slytherin_scorpio 

23rd October 2017:
A handful of spelling and grammar mistakes but not too much to fret over. Immensely enjoyed how you wrote Albus and Harry's relationship. I wonder, did you know Lilly's name is spelt 'Lily' in the books? Up to you of course to correct. Looking forward to the next chapter!

Author's Response: Oop I never noticed the "Lily" thing. Thanks for the heads up! I would correct it but I'll probably make the same mistake in the future. My grammar and sentence structure isn't the greatest. Thanks for the feedback.

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Review #2, by alaysia cuffie 

22nd October 2017:
this chapter was very good

Author's Response: Much appreciated.

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