5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Liana 

27th September 2017:
I think I like that you make the Potter children all seem so normal. You'd think with Harry and Ginny as parents they wouldn't have to worry about anything. I hope James finds something to do. Some of his cousins don't to seem to have a clue either:D

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Review #2, by MargaretLane 

27th August 2017:
Aw, poor Albus. I don't know if it would make it easier or harder to have a cousin you feel sure will pass taking the test the same day as you. On the one hand, like he says, it means the attention isn't entirely on you but it also means there's an inevitable comparison if she passes and he fails. And the person who passed might feel uncomfortable about celebrating.

But I think Albus will pass anyway. I wouldn't even be surprised if Rose failed. Completely reverse Albus's expectations.

LOVE the part about having to do it without being seen by the fake Muggles.

Oooh, I can see a romance developing between Albus and Emily.

I'll be back for the last chapter. Tomorrow probably. It's late now.

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Review #3, by AlbusPotter 

21st August 2017:
One question: why Al and Emily? One of the things that had been best about these books is their lack of romance. Also, why someone we hardly know anything about? The only thing we know about Emily is to she's a ravenclaw. Also, why not another Gryffindor? I hope this does not come across rudely. I'm just curious.

Author's Response: Why not Al and Emily? Romance will never be a focus in this novel, but there are bits of it here and there. But, Al and Emily haven't even gone out yet. Hard to say what will happen.

As for the Gryffindor girls. One is Rose. One is Amanda. Al's not going to date Amanda. Janie Creevey went out with John briefly, so Al won't go out with her. Al briefly went out with Marina Jordan-Bell in the previous book, so he's not going to date her twin sister.

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Review #4, by HarryGinnyLove88 

18th August 2017:
I realy hope the next one comes sooner :)

Its great Al pased test and rose driving james mad :)
And Emily. I hope Al ask her out ;) ;) ;)

Author's Response: It'll come on Tuesday! And there will be more to come with Al and Emily. Thanks for reading and reviewing! :)

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Review #5, by ngayonatkailanman 

18th August 2017:
Marvellous,as usual. enjoyed myself big time.

Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it! :)

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