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Review #1, by adluvshp 

23rd June 2016:
Hey there! Lost Muse here for your challenge review!

Ooh, I quite liked reading this. I used to be a Twilight fan too, but not so much anymore, so well, I still enjoyed reading this. The crossover is interesting - I do see it is quite AU. From the hints, I can see Bella is either a vampire, or was bitten by a vampire but survived the attack. Something along those lines. She is a Muggle either way though so that makes for an interesting turn of events. I did catch that the "inspector" is Harry - guessing he's undercover as an Auror to investigate and stuff.

Your descriptions and all were really cool, and overall I look forward to the rest of the story as the premise is very good. Great use of the challenge prompt =) Cheers!


Author's Response: Hey!

Oh, I'm glad!

Yeah, same. You're right on the second part. Bella is human... the scar on her wrist is where James had bit her.

I hope to develop this into a multi-chapter fic, so I look forward to this myself.

Thank you for creating the challenge! I'm happy that I participated! ^_^

Thanks for reading too and leaving a review!


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