4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Storiesbooksandnovels 

21st June 2016:
No. Always is said just enough that you get that it's they're special word.

Author's Response: Yeah, it's just so sadly poetic, isn't it?

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Review #2, by victoria_anne 

8th May 2016:
I AM BURSTING INSIDE BECAUSE OF SIRIUS AND ADHARA! I CAN'T EVEN TELL YOU!

You have made me very very very happy. My two favourite characters ♥

*faints*

I'm also reviewing for the last chapter, because in my haste to get to this one I just... didn't. Whoops. Anyway, I loved Sirius relationship with his father. Typical thirteen year old wanting to be different, giving attitude left right and center. Also, I LOVE Regulus! I honestly think you have his character absolutely perfect. We know how proud his parents were of him becoming a Death Eater, and I can see that already by the way he's so eager to please them, but there's still so much good in him! I just wish Sirius would be nicer, but that's brothers for you.

I love James' family! This is the first we've seen of them! And for someone writing a little bit about Fleamont, it was such a thrill to see him!

Your attention to detail is astounding, with all the talk of the war and the Aurors (ohhh and poor Dorcas! But I love that she has a brother, I'm hoping they can support each other and become friends ♥). You make the story so real, and I know it's something I could never accomplish!

♥ Always ♥ (I love the mention of Severus promising nothing will happen to her)

My fingers are flying across the keyboard as I write this so sorry if none of it makes sense ha ha, there's just so much to say and gush about! I love this story so so much!

(♥ more love for Sirius and Adhara because AHHH! ♥)

All my love,
B xx

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Review #3, by May 

2nd May 2016:
Really loved reading your storyline about lily and James younger years

Author's Response: Thank you so much, and I hope you stick with them till the end!

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Review #4, by JilyFever 

30th April 2016:
hey, I'm a new reader and I must say I'm loving the story! This is also my first review so I don't really know what to say, but I did like the way you are showing the war, like in another prespective and I looove all the James and Lily little moments so far. I do thing the 'Always' is beggining to be too much, but I get what you are doing.
I hope this helps and please don't take long to write another chapter because I can't wait! ^^

Author's Response: Hello, and thank you so much for stopping by. I LOVE your username, JILY forever! I have a feeling we're going to get along really well!

I'm honored that you picked my story to leave your first review on, and I am so happy you like the story.

This review does help, and I hope you continue to stick with the gang through the next chapters.

I will cut down on the Always bit too :)

~Ysh


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