3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by victoria_anne 

19th April 2016:
"A lot of Lily and James" says the chapter summary.


Hi Ysh ♥

Oh poor Remus! People are starting to notice! And oooh I see the beginning of James and Lily's friendship! I'm loving this! Being able to see it develop so slowly is just so great :)

Ha ha omg the four of them under the Invisibility Cloak is hilarious, I love it! And Harry, Ron and Hermione thought they had a hard time!

Yay Animagus training! I wonder what's happening there with James though? Hmm...

Aw I hate to see Sirius and Regulus fight because I really heart little Reg so much. Sirius stop being so mean to your little brother! Ack!

YES! Totally called that Lily would be paired with James! *rubs hands for the chaos that is clearly about to ensue*

Oh no! The beginning of Severus using the Dark Arts :( taught by Lucius Malfoy no less! Tcha!

Oh my goodness what a great chapter! I really feel like things are falling into place to where they'll be in the story we know and love, and I can't wait to read on!

Now go get writing! GO GO GO! *cracks whip*

♥ B

Author's Response: Oh B, your reviews put such a wide smile on my face!!

Yay! I'm glad you caught on the beginnings of Lily and James friendship. i was wondering if it was all a bit too slow for a fanfic, I mean most people might want to dive right into all that romance?

I know, Sirius is kinda mean isn't he? As much as I am on Team Sirius 5ever I have to be objective when I write him. Sigh! Why can't the marauders have been happy forever :(

I always have this nagging feeling that nothing important happens in the chapters, and it's almost always things just moving along. But your reviews just make me feel so much better about it all.

Yes mam *tips hat and opens google docs to continue writing*


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Review #2, by sweetypye0110 

6th February 2016:
Ah!! I just binge read this entire story and can't believe I'm caught up!!! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! I hope to update every two weeks, and looking forward to seeing more of your reviews! Thank you for stopping by

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Review #3, by Unwritten Curse 

3rd February 2016:
Yay! An update! I saw your post over at the forums and got super excited. :)

First, I have to say SIRIUS YOU'RE AN IDIOT. "Oh, Remus is going to be ill that day because it's the full moon and… oh, wait, I gave too much away. Silly me. Might as well just tell you all that HE'S A WEREWOLF." (Okay, obviously he didn't say that, but he might as well have. He's being careless and that makes me nervous).

The love triangle is heating up! I love that Lily is discovering potential feelings for James, though she still seems to dislike him most of the time. But at the same time, I feel sad for Marlene. Especially after Mary mentioned James making googly eyes at Lily IN FRONT OF Marlene. I knew this would end in heart break for her. It looks as though it's already begun.

The Marauders' quest to become Animagi is still super awesomely cool. That it turned James's eye blue is such a fascinating twist! Again, did you come up with that yourself? Or did you research it? Either way, it's awesome. It was hilarious when he had to squint and therefore performed poorly in class and the teacher walked away shaking her head. EVEN THOUGH James was actually doing awesomely well at deflecting Lily's hexes.

By the way, you're once again doing an AWESOME job at foreshadowing. James's work in becoming an Animagus is making him a better wizard which will make him an AWESOME Order member.


I don't even want to mention the last scene because it makes me so sad. I still don't like Snape but I want better for him than that. He strikes me as similar to Regulus in that they both got roped into the Dark Arts. To fulfill some sort of "destiny." Sad.

SO HAPPY TO SEE THIS UPDATE. Keep up the great work. :)


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