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Review #1, by ZackHack 

31st July 2013:
Another excellent chapter! The battles are epic without being cumbersome, and I can't wait to see how this story concludes. Trelawney's return is particularly intriguing--the twists keep coming.

Author's Response: Happy to see your enjoying the ending to the story! There are only 2 chapters left to post before the second instalment wraps up. Glad you liked the battle scenes... they are some of the most fun to write even though they are quite challenging. Thanks again for reviewing and taking the time to give me some feedback!

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