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2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Kevin 

19th August 2013:
Great writing - I really love your work. Very true to JKR's storyline. I did notice a blip - James was a Chaser, not a Seeker. You referenced this while James was presenting Harry his broom in this chapter. Just thought I would mention it; I can see how detail-oriented you are by your writing. Although I am not much of a writer I am an avid reader, having done so for nearly 50 years (I started at a VERY young age and have read all of the classics,HUGE amounts of Sci-Fi and Fantasy and tons of mythology) and I must say you are quite good. Just remember to proofread well - I have noticed some typos, a few grammar errors and a couple of dropped words but you sound very, very busy, so I can definitely understand how that can happen! That being said, please keep up the most excellent work! I am so excited for the last chapter to be posted and hopefully a "Book 3" in the series!!

Author's Response: Thank you for leaving such a detailed review - I cannot express to you the appreciation I have for such a thing. Good, bad or indifferent I love hearing what readers think of my work.
Regarding James' Quidditch position - I too noticed that inaccuracy days after posting the chapter and I kicked myself for it! I really try hard to keep up with the canon in even the most minor ways. One of my major goals with this series is for readers to say to themselves "I could see a story like this follow Deathly Hallows" even if it is not their cup of tea.
I always do a quick scan of a completed chapter before I post it, but sometimes the excitement of putting it online for others to read enables me to miss a few things in my rush. It is my intention to re-read every chapter and clean up any mistakes that I have made and then re-post accordingly. Thanks for letting me know that you've noticed a couple mistakes.
I have a rare day off tomorrow so I plan on completing my almost finished last chapter and have it posted by tomorrow night. I hope you enjoy it as well as the future Book 3 that will most likely serve as the conclusion to this little trilogy that I've started. I was planning on writing 4 stories but as I grow older and life gets busier and busier I have realized that I may not have much free time left to complete it. Instead of 4 I plan to put it all together in one last novel as for me, it would be a shame not to complete my story that I've literally spent years on so far.
Sorry for rambling a bit there and thanks again for your thoughtful review! Hope you continue to enjoy!


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Review #2, by matthew 

2nd April 2013:
love this cant wait for the next one :D

Author's Response: Thanks! Hope you continue to enjoy the conclusion of the story!

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