24 Reviews Found

Review #1, by amy1210 

18th March 2011:
I thought it was a tad bit predictable!
But still really nice! :)

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Review #2, by PhilosopherPlaydoh 

16th March 2010:
Out of character? Most likely. Interesting and funny? Yeah. Some sort of scenic description also would have been cool. Very cute concept.

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Review #3, by Lillian Rose Potter 

10th March 2010:
Yeah. I knew Harry won't cheat. I thought it was good. :)

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Review #4, by The Riddler 

18th November 2009:
I really enjoyed it. It was very sweet. The only problems that I could see were punctuation errors. Other than that, I congratulate you on a truly heart-touching story.

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Review #5, by my wicked quill 

12th October 2009:
maybe change up some of the cursing to more british terms? rather than amercian ones? either way sweet story!!! 8/10

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Review #6, by lilyluna 

6th October 2009:
That was so charming!!! Loved it!

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Review #7, by Lily_JamesFan 

16th September 2009:
It's sad that Ginny didn't trust Harry at first or that she had such low self-esteem, but the ending is cute! I 'm glad it worked out :). I like how you showed the problems that could come up with them both being so famous, and I feel like, unfortunately, that is really something the media would do to get customers.

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Review #8, by RosieLeo 

17th June 2009:
That was lovely! i was concerned that it would be all angsty and stuff, but it wasn't at all!
i like when stories have unreliable narrators, where their confusion is our confusion, and you did a first class job of it :D

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Review #9, by daphne 13 

31st May 2009:
haha. hilarious. liked it. ;)

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Review #10, by BellBell 

17th April 2009:
ui :)
I like it!
although it is kinda strange, that ginnys mode is changing like that. And in a few moments you can maybe describe her feelings a little bit more but otherwise I can't find any problem in the story!
And I like your start :D

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Review #11, by Izzy 

4th April 2009:
Cute! I like it! :) A tad more substance though, maybe?

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Review #12, by j 

4th February 2009:
lily luna potter??.anywayz..nice work...harry n ginny stories r alwaz..gr8...keep going

Author's Response: thanx for revieviewing and liking it ;)

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Review #13, by Oh_Skrewt 

30th January 2009:
Not your best piece, I thought the characters were off. Ginny would not be insecure about Harry's and her's marriage and how would she have forgotten about her daughters birth? Could have done better with this piece, good try though.

Author's Response: even the best get insecure some times, she was pretty upset and the headline was supposed to make people think he was cheating... if you saw something like that 'bout your guy would you think; aaw that's my little girl he's talking bout?
thanx anyway :)

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Review #14, by Sabrina_Hilling15 

28th January 2009:
Harry is a sweetheart in this story! I love it! 10/10

Author's Response: thank u so much ;)

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Review #15, by Manwe Valarian 

28th January 2009:
A note about childbirth, You have Lily being 70 lbs that is the weight if a seven year old. Maybe Ginny had just recently been released from St. Mungo's after recovering from that. That would have made her a little less desireable ;). Otherwise, Good story and concept!

Author's Response: yeah i some one said that was a good wheight i think. gotta change that now ;)
thanx for the review

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Review #16, by leezdz 

27th January 2009:
I think your story was charming, but the profanity almost made me not finish it. There are lots of words in the English language that you could have used instead. And spelling errors benefit from Spell Check--almost every word processing program has one.

Author's Response: uhm, yeah i know, i used it...
english is not my native language so i think i have the right to make some errors :)
thanxs for the review

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Review #17, by DeliaDee 

27th January 2009:
That was adorable but I think that if Lily Luna weighed just over 70 lbs. when she was born Ginny has a lot of reason to be crying. :)

Author's Response: yeah, probably but i don't use lbs normally so...
thanx for reviewing

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Review #18, by harry_ginny_3 

18th January 2009:
Damn, you scared me! I thought this was going to be a heartbreaking story on how Ginny finds out that Harry is cheating on her!!! Thank god it isn't though! Good job!

Author's Response: yeah, don't like the idea of him cheating on her so...
glad you liked it :)

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Review #19, by fribbie 

17th January 2009:
Your story is cute, but you have several misspellings and you misused the term 'stone' as a measurement. By saying the baby weighed 5 stone when she was born, that is actually 70 lbs.

Author's Response: heh, sorry about that... it's not my native language, don't know if spelled thet right.. hmm i'll change that as soon as i have the time :)
thax for the review anyway :)

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Review #20, by octoberose 

1st January 2009:
LOL what's that saying about how not to judge a book by it's cover? I think it applies here:) it's a cute story

Author's Response: Yeah, it probably does :) thanks for the review :)

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Review #21, by marrymyharry 

26th December 2008:
Sorry,but I do have a bit of critisism.I don't like your use of language in this story. And do you really think that Harry and Ginny should be cursing like that,especially when there's a little girl in the house? Is there really any need for such heavy language?

Author's Response: I'ts ok with critisism, makes you better... But I know that when I'm angry, and some other times, I curse. Lily is like three months in this story so I don't think it matters to her...

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Review #22, by Mrs_Ben_Wood 

26th December 2008:
cute. I'm glad Harry wasn't cheating on Ginny :) good story

Author's Response: thanks, I don't see him as a person who would so... :)

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Review #23, by Banba 

26th December 2008:
Cute. I generally don't like stories that portray Ginny as being emotional and weak, but given the circumstances that you set up I think that it fit nicely. Good job.

Author's Response: Ginny can't always be strong...

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Review #24, by Rae_of_Sunshine 

25th December 2008:
This was cute, although my one main piece of advice would be Harry dropping the good old F bomb. I can easily see Ginny doing it, but Harry would probably only use it if he were very, very angry, and he was just more confused in this story, I think. Other than that, I loved it. :)

Author's Response: Thanks :) I'll think of that next time

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