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Review #1, by Potions_partnerAfter Life : Shocking.

17th January 2018:
I'm enjoying Afterlife. Of course, what sets this story apart from the others is the setting. I'm interested to see how you develop it and how it impacts the characters/their relationships.

Please, please, please finish SSS. I love that story and have imagined a complete ending but I really want to see what the author, herself, writes.

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Review #2, by Potions_partnerSaving Severus Snape : xxvi.

4th August 2017:
This is one of the best stories I've read on the site. I went back and checked out some of your older stories. Your writing has matured so much since you started!

You do a wonderful job of understanding JKR's characters. So many authors just throw the characters into a story that doesn't really fit the character's personality. Based on the characters already developed by JKR, I could really see Hermione and Severus making these choices and saying these words etc. In addition, you do a great job of balancing the romance and the other problems Hermione has which keeps me on the edge of my seat.

You mentioned that she needed to find a way to test the antivenom. What about testing it on Mr. Weasley in Book 5? Thus making the time travel even more crucial to the plot.

Please finish it soon!

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