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Review #26, by Rosie Letters

17th June 2017:
Hey again!
I'll be going back to review chapter 3 in a bit, but I couldn't help but continue to chapter four. I really like all the flashbacks because even though perhaps Sly does not see it, it kind of displays a bit of parallelism between James and Sly's relationship. She does seem to becoming a bit more comfortable with him in the present, but there does seem to be a similarity between younger and present Sly and how they brush off any hints that James might drop of him being interested. Now, I'm not entirely sure if younger James was romantically interested in Sly, but I did sense that there was a possibility of a good friendship. However, present James is not being too subtle, is he? (;
I'm getting the feeling that Sly is going to need a lot of convincing though...but if James (and my) suspicions about the potion are correct then she has a very good reason to be wary.
So.I'm going to save a bit of my rambling for my review of chapter 3, but cannot wait for chapter 5!
Thanks again,

Author's Response: Oh gosh, I wrote a long response for the last review so let's hope I won't ramble so much. I'm glad you like the parallel between flashbacks and present. I thought it'd bring deeper meaning on Sly and James' relationship, as well as other relationships. Yes, Sly isn't very trusting when it comes to relationships so she's going to need convincing and some earning of trust.

Thank you!


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Review #27, by Rosie Memories

5th June 2017:
Hm, honestly I'm partial to Puddlemere United because that was Oliver Wood's team and I always loved him haha. The party should be interesting, so I hope they go. And cannot wait to see how the Ryan aspect of the story develops! Thanks for another great chapter (:

Author's Response: I'm partial to Puddlemere United, as well! Thank you for you're continued support. :)


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Review #28, by Rosie Problems

5th June 2017:
I really like this first chapter (: We got a bit of a taste of the underlying drama and who the main character is and I'm excited to see where it goes. Thanks for sharing your writing and I'll be waiting for chapter two (but no rush!). Hope you have a lovely day!

Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter is now up, also, after some long pending. Thanks again for your support! :)


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Review #29, by The Justice League Problems

3rd June 2017:
This is a really good start to your story!

Author's Response: Thank you much! This is my first time writing for HP and for his website, but I've read sooo much over the years. I'm almost done writing the second chapter so please stay tuned. Thanks again for your review!


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