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Review #26, by Anonymous Surprises Around Every Corner

15th December 2012:
Please update, its been six months now! :/ a new chapter would be a great xmas surprise. :)

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Review #27, by Indonesiangirl Surprises Around Every Corner

7th December 2012:
Finally finished reading- you did a great job! It's as if mrs rowling had written it hersekf :)

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Review #28, by TheSecretMarauder Surprises Around Every Corner

20th November 2012:
I want to read more. This story is awesomeness. that is all :)

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Review #29, by Navya Surprises Around Every Corner

11th November 2012:
hey! please update soon!!!

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Review #30, by onestop_hpfan18 Surprises Around Every Corner

19th September 2012:
Yay! Lily is pregnant with Harry... can't wait for him to make his first appearance! And I enjoyed this chapter, too. Though, a couple critics, when you have a sentence before dialogue you want to end it with a period (not a comma like you did) before the dialogue. It's more grammatically correct. And then I noticed you had two spaces between each sentences (you only need one space between sentences). Then there were some typos, but nothing I was able to glaze over while reading.

I especially loved Sirius's boistous attitude when he started questioning whether he was going to be godfather (should should kept lowercase). And having Voldemort be the one to draw both Lily and James to Lily's pregnancy first was definitely an interesting twist considering where we're all leading (with Voldemort killing James and Lily and failing to kill Harry due to Lily's protection, thus being torn from his body into oblivion to wait for a follower to find him) at the end of James and Lily's story. Anyway, great chapter! :)

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Review #31, by Jasmin Chapter 26 - Graduation

10th September 2012:
really good chapter !:) but isnt lilys patronus a doe in the original hp series and thats why snapes patronus was a doe ? just curious as to why you changed it ! :)

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Review #32, by mauraudergurl<3 Surprises Around Every Corner

14th August 2012:
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG i just finished the whole story, sorry but i decided not to review after every chapter cos it would mean id have to wait longer before reading the rest! I am loving this story! All the other james/lily stories ive read always take AGES for them to get together and then either end straight away, or break them up in the middle and then end!
Thks one is so good cos you did the hating him bit really well but didnt drag it on for ages and then theyve been amazingly happy since which delights me as im prob one of the biggest mushy romantics out there!
At first i thought this was just gona be a sweet story about how cute a couple they were.. Which i was fine with.. But then after graduating you made it so much more complex with their jobs and the order and everything, its incredible!
Ive been really sick lately so this story has made my days so much more barable! Thank you so much!

Please before the end have things sorted with remus, its so sad to see him this way! And ahh lilies pregnent ek! I cant wait for the rest, oh and i really loved the bit where she talked with james' grandfather about being pregnant, it was really nice!
The goblin village they can access is also really cool, espesh if its your origional take on it, and the rings are amazing.. If there was one thing in the entire story i didnt like it was the message lily wrote on james' ring, i just dont think it fit well.. Personally i think if it had said something along the lines of "i cant believe i finally said yes" it would have been perfect with james' message and just would have been cuter.. But thats just my own oersonal oppinon, not an insult of any kind intended!

You make james and lily as a couple almost unbearable sweet and amazing, why cant he be real?!?! But youre writing is so amazing sometimes it does feel real!:-):-):-)

Please please please please update this story as soon as you can! Since ive read it all in one go, i pm not aware of how long it usually takes you to update but im literally praying tonight that its not long! And about how many more chapters are you going to do?
I presume youre gona write untill theyre death, though it will be a sad ending i think it wiuld be a good one, espesially with lilys dream and everything :-)

I love you and this story! Keep up the good work!

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Review #33, by Mary-Tyler Moore Chapter 38 - Lurking in the Shadows

26th July 2012:
okay so here is the thing... if you put this on fan fiction. net the entire website would implode. Because this is DAMN good :) I love you and your writing. PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Seriously i have been reading this for at least three years

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Review #34, by Caro Chapter 1 - Head Boy and Girl

25th July 2012:
I totally love your story! Ever since I read this fanfic others sirously suck! PLEASE continue updating chapters. I am looking for them nearly everyday. xxx Caro

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Review #35, by ABCD Surprises Around Every Corner

17th July 2012:
Omg, you updated! I was SO EXCITED when i checked(which i do weekly) and saw another chapter! Loved it btw! And please please please dont make us wait this long for the next one! :)

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Review #36, by ABCD Surprises Around Every Corner

17th July 2012:
Omg, you updated! I was SO EXCITED when i checked(which i do weekly) and saw another chapter! Loved it btw! And please please please dont make us wait this long for the next one! :)

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Review #37, by Rosa Surprises Around Every Corner

6th July 2012:

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Review #38, by Rosa Surprises Around Every Corner

4th July 2012:
You are really good at writing may I just say...
Please, please, please update soon!
I love the story and can't wait too see how far along the timeline you will take it :)
Rosa xx

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Review #39, by she-who-must-not-be-named Surprises Around Every Corner

4th July 2012:
this story is really very greatly fantastically great, but there is just 1 problem:
u need to please please please write some more! :)

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Review #40, by nisarg_91 Surprises Around Every Corner

1st July 2012:
The wait was long, but it was worth it. So, I'm guessing the events place the time at around Christmas 1979? Because I hear Harry was one when James and Lily died, so that will be Halloween 1981.

This was a wonderful chapter, but I'm guessing this wasn't really the 3rd time they defied Voldemort, or perhaps it was, considering that the prophecy should be made in some time.

I still await the time when Remus gets some sense and asks Lauren out, but I fathom that will also involve a certain vampire.

It's hard to imagine Sirius, of all people settling down, but you've made it absolutely believable. That is amazing work.

Eagerly waiting the next chapter

Author's Response: Thank you all for the reviews! I am happy to hear you are all enjoying the story (again or for the first time) and like the latest chapter. Yes, the timing is around xmas 1979, and yes, this was their third time facing voldemort. i am organizing my thoughts for the next chapter so we'll see how things go. as you can tell, my chapters are longer than most since i end up with lots to say...and consequently, lots to edit. i will do my best. :)

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Review #41, by Aine Surprises Around Every Corner

1st July 2012:
Loved it!! I can't believe they found that way they were pregnant but finally Harry is on his way, hehe. Is this the third time they defied Voldemort? Anyways, I hope you update soon. Keep up the amazing work!

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Review #42, by mef_hplvr Surprises Around Every Corner

1st July 2012:
I can't believe she found out that way. But I mean they're pregnant! Yippee! Update soon please

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Review #43, by Skyler315 Surprises Around Every Corner

29th June 2012:
I can't believe you finally updated!!! It has been forever!!! I'm so happy now!!! I love the story and it was a great chapter. Please continue to update soon!!!

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Review #44, by Jaz Surprises Around Every Corner

28th June 2012:
THIS STORY IS AMAZING! The characters are just how I've always imagined them to be and the plot is flawless. Lily and James are so in love and they are perfect for each other!!! I cannot wait to see what happens next and I hope you'll update soon!
9,500,700/10 =)


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Review #45, by Kathrynen Surprises Around Every Corner

27th June 2012:
So er hi?
First of all, I love this story! I've read it before but I reread it when this chapter and I just fell in love all over again. Seriously, it's a great story and I love the family line ties, it makes for a very interesting story and I would love to see where all that is gonna go.
I love Lauren, she's one of my favorite characters and it'll be so sad when she dies or whatever (Harry has no family so I'm assuming...but you know what they say about assuming, please) but I do really like her.
I love the friendship between Lily and Sirius, its really funny and her temper is great with him.
James. man. Oh my god I love him. He's so cute and over protective and loves Lily ridiculous amounts and them two together is adorable.
Lily is great and I love that she works in the DOM, it's a much more interesting place for her to work than what you usually get, it really shows off her skills and gives loads of opportunities for interesting occurrences.
Basically, your story is really well written and I haven't noticed any grammatical errors (grammar nazi for the win). It's also surprisingly canon considering the whole blood lines thing. I love this because it means that I can like believe the story if that makes sense but you've still given it your own little twist.
So congratulations on an amazing story and please update soon (:

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Review #46, by Hope's Mom Surprises Around Every Corner

26th June 2012:
Awww! Lily is expecting! James is amazing - so sweet and caring. I was thrilled to read this update - thank you!

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Review #47, by anon Surprises Around Every Corner

26th June 2012:
awesome glad you are back

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Review #48, by sush Chapter 39 - Baby Making

9th May 2012:
WOW !!! awesome it is please please please tell me you are writing more of it ans soon.I cant wait to read

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Review #49, by Kierst Chapter 39 - Baby Making

1st May 2012:
This was such an awesome story!! I really want to know more and see this story through until their deaths. Keep up the good work!

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Review #50, by Megan :) Chapter 39 - Baby Making

25th April 2012:
Spent the past couple of days reading this story and it was great :D well worth spending my time reading it :)

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