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Review:Op Tree says:
I'm back, and only one day later, so kudos for the quick updating! I loved the chapter and I think that Amelie reacted perfectly; technically not lying but sharing only certain pieces of information, very smart indeed.

Now about the whole Quidditch sitch, I think that Lily should undoubtedly make the team, and it would be sweet for her to follow her father's steps. I defintely think that James and Al won't be the happiest but Lily is happy so that's what matters!

Now Emmett, he's defintely not my favourite character but he's quite difficult to comment on. His passive agressiveness is extremely concerning but I can take into account that he may actually have feelings for Amelie. Hopefully that will be sorted out soon!

Once again, amazing chapter! Also how many chapters do you think this novel will be?? But till next time, so update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thank you for commenting again! And I am so glad you liked the chapter. I have been procrastinating real life so hard recently thus the quick updates (I also pre-wrote 3 chapters before I posted anything)!

I am new to the creative writing gig and I can see how it is difficult to comment on Emmett because I am trying to figure out how to give my characters depth without being overly descriptive as well as Emmett obviously suffers from Amelie being the narrator and having some first person bias chucked in there! Hopefully in the next few chapters he will become a clearer character to you.. there is definitely more to Emmett (in my mind) which hasn't been shown yet.

Chapter-wise initially I thought 20 chapters but I am at 5 and there is still a lot to happen...I am thinking now around 20-25 chapters. I have a plan of things I want to happen but I also am not sure how those will split into chapters. Confidently I want to say no more than 30.

Thanks again for commenting!
RP x

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