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Review:Violet Potter 434 says:
i'm loving this so far!

please let her not be stupid and just tell james the truth about lily

eek i can't wait for the next chapter, it had better be soon, i'm the only one to take ages to update

i can't think of any names other than the ones i use in my stories (Bex Williams, Charlie (Charlotte) Davis, Dexter Hale etc) they aren't great but if you're struggling then...

i love your plot idea tho, it took me a while to get my head round at first but i'm getting there

from me xxx

Author's Response: Thank you for your review!

No spoilers on if Amelie will be stupid or not but characters making stupid decisions often drives the plot in fanfics... ;)

Thanks for the name suggestions - HP fics I always try think of fun names that I visit baby name websites just to find the most random name that is also not annoying to write but after a while I just go "this one can be Bob until I think of something better"

Even in my mind it took me ages to figure out how to implement the plot idea so I can definitely understand the taking a while to get your head around! It is the curse of trying something new when you know a good cliche plot (which I do love) would be easier.

Chapter 4 is in the works so fingers crossed you don't have to wait long.

RP x

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