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Review:scooterbug8515/M C Croer says:
This is an interesting and cute start. While phones are not common among wizards I am assuming that it has something to do with the fact that time has passed on the wizarding world is trying to be more current.

All the same the conversation was fun and amusing between the girl and James. I loved James' jokes and the reaction to it being James Potter of all people that she was talking to. This has a good starting premise and I am sure what follows is just as amusing and delightful.

I would worry if there was to be more of James and the girl talking but seeing as there are more chapters to come James will have a chance to maybe learn the name of the girl he spoke to - though I suppose he could ask someone who his cousin's ex was and learn that way. That could be some interesting dynamic, if James dates his cousin's ex. Who knows. Anyway, nice job.

Author's Response: You assume right, my friend! Time has passed and I have the head canon that a purposeful branch of muggle liaison or a private company invested into the merging of magic and phones (after all, radios do exist in the magical world, and so do cars).
I'm happy you found the conversation entertaining! She doesn't much react about the fame but more about the fact that she rambled for minutes to a complete stranger XD
Yes, James could have resolved the whole conundrum quite quickly, but he didn't want to share with his family and he was weary of going to Louis directly! YES THE DYNAMIC. haha it's the pivot of the sequel I'm writing, the whole family face off.
Thank you so much for your lovely review!
Elena xx


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