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Review:emma28 says:
Oh. My. God. I literally have no words. Okay, Iíll try and type this clearly...

This was so action packed!! The descriptions of the werewolf changes were so incredible!! I was actually cringing when reading it because I could feel itó you are an AMAZING writer!

She finds out Remus is the werewolf and Remus finds out about Serena. And the werewolf bond. And the pack. And theyíre drawn to each other. And the friendship. And the closeness. And Remus and Serena. Wow!

James and Serena. He gets her to turn back, my heart swelled at that moment. I felt terrible for poor Serena but I love their scenes together. They have so much chemistry, itís unbelievable .
And garggh! What was James going to say before Remus howled!??? I was so torn between wanting to scream out of happiness that Remus might (and did) find out about Serena, and cry out of despair that James didnít get a chance to speak.

And Sirius knows! Ohh I donít think that would go down too well. I get the feeling Sirius might be mad that Serena didnít Ďtrustí him enough to tell him, and furious that James knew and never said anything. I feel like a big fight me get happen with all of them.

And omg, when Remus (werewolf form) had blood dripping from his mouth, my immediate thought was ďomg he ate PeterĒ hahaha. It just got so intense, I couldnít think properly.

This chapter was absolutely fantastic! Another one of my favs (lol, all of your chapters are my favs). I feel like everything is going to come out very soon.

And it was so interesting before but now itís even more mind-blowing. Because Serena cheated on Sirius with James (James&Serena forever!), so James and Sirius have a fight, and Sirius and Serena will fight. But now, Remus and Serena are pretty much tied at the hip, so I reckon Remus will side with Serena which might cause a fight between Sirius and Remus.

And it looks like the only one who wouldnít be involved is Peter lol.

Oh and before I forget... what was with that ending!? Where did James and Sirius go? Why did they just leave? How did they know Remus wouldnít hurt her? Arghh so many questions!

Iím so ready for the next chapter!! And thank you so so so much for taking the time to write this story and update for us. And please donít ever feel pressured to update quickly. Of course, I always look forward to reading new chapters, but take all the time you need, Iíll always wait patiently :)

10/10

p.s. sorry for the really long comments. I just always have so many emotions after reading your chapters and I have to tell you.

Author's Response: emma28,

I adore you! Your comments always keep me going, even if I feel like I'm hitting into a wall (like I was before I published this newest chapter).

AND RIGHT?! So many feelings and so many fights in the future. I've got a pretty clear idea about where I want to go with at least the next couple chapters, but I envision them being pretty difficult to write just because it's going to be packing a lot in!

I love reading all of your thoughts!! I also wonder how my chapters are going to come off, so it's very refreshing getting to hear all of your thoughts about them.

Keep posted, I should have the next chapter up this week!! :D

-KBD


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