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Review:Potterhead1994 says:
Okay, so I absolutely love this story. And I love James and Sly together; however, my biggest thing is that he did know her well enough in school to not do the letters. Maybe not when they started, but I feel that by the end he shouldíve stopped them. And also, he obviously has feelings for her in school, how come he asked her name in the first chapter? I guess thatís bugged me. Like I said, love your story but James has annoyed me to know no end. Iím also really happy that he finally knows.

Author's Response: Thank you for loving the story, and James and Sly together! I have to agree with you about that, after all he did know Sly. I wrote more content in James' reaction in the next chapter. James has been a coward a lot of the time with Ainsly, at least, and... well, you'll see. As for 'Not knowing her name,' he was being a coward and pretended for various reasons. Just say her damn name! Haha That character flaw annoys me, too, and now that he knows/everything is out (mostly) he'll eventually continue to grow as a person. James is kinda complex to write and I apologize if it has been confusing, most of it is intentional because we've only seen inside James' brain a few times. Again, thank you so much for reading and leaving a detailed review. Honestly, it gets more complicated when I don't hear any feedback and I simply am listening to the story in my own head (rereading it to make sure it makes sense), so I love hearing from people. The next chapter should be up soon!

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