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Review:Anonymous says:
This chapter actually had me crying, it was so emotional and I don't think I've ever felt more sympathy to a fictional character. I figured out what had happened to Sly in the early chapters and I was felt so devasted. She has suffered so much and she is such a kind person and it truly is unfair to see such bad things happen to people like Sly.

I was anticipating the big reveal to James and I think you wrote it delicately and fit with the tone of the novel perfectly. It really adds salt to the wound to see how much James' actions in school affected not only Ainsly but also himself. A part of me hates him as he is the source of Sly's pain but another part of me pities him. He always meant it to be a joke but he, in actuality, caused the destruction of a life. I'm really interested in how you will write James' reaction to this revelation and how it will affect him as a person.

It's always difficult to correctly write about these types of issues; you have to considerate, delicate whilst dealing with the fact it is a reality. I mentioned this earlier, but this chapter was extremely emotional. It truly is heart-breaking to see Sly's faith being broken down so quickly, espically as it had just started to restore itself, it's honestly so upsetting.

However, moving on a lighter note, this was a great chapter and I can't wait to read how you prrgress the story. Well done on another brillaint chapter and please do update the story soon.

Author's Response: It hurt my heart to write the scene between James and Sly, but it had to be done. I apologize if the wording was too hard to read. Maybe I should have placed a trigger warning... I'll be more mindful of that in the future.

James' reaction was so difficult to write, and I'm still not completely satisfied with the delivery—as the next chapter is still pending. He's not taking it well, to put it lightly.

Thank you so much for the positive and detailed review!


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