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Review:Glucagon says:
Hi! So I'm in love with This story and have been reading from the start but can never be bothered to review but that one scene with James where he tells her he thinks he's going insane has touched me so much like wow it gave me amazing feels I reread it all so many times, he likes her so much!! When he pulls her toward him after moss comes over he's just perfect in my eyes. I do think this feeling of intense emotion they have may have something to do with the muggle studies project as jenny mentioned, that would make sense. but I want to believe it's james' undying love haha
I love jenelle and understand she has her insecurities so is probably playing hard to get with good reason but she is starting to really irritate me now like does she not see how hypercritical it is for her to ask out moss to get a reaction from James that's literally the exact thing she had a problem with James for doing to her with flora
And to be brutally honest I think the last chapter was probably the least interesting I'd read, this one however I don't think you should worry about at all. Although not much happened I thought it was funny And intriguing to read. The political issues in the wizarding world were nice to read about and I liked reading about the clarke siblings. Also as an avid philosopher the mention of Aristotle made me very happy!
Can't wait to read more and see where you take this, rooting for jenelle to just show James some affection even if they don't get back together just yet (I like moss but he's not the one for her I'm sorry)
Happy new year!

Author's Response: Hi!! Ahhh omg i don't even care about reviews lol but thank you so much for dropping one I'm so happy - nay ecstatic that you loved this one so much to write something! that means a lot because i - as a serial non reviewer (i know sue me i'm trying to change its my new years resolution) - love being an invisible reader lol.

Gaaahh can't believe you re read it!! It was such a crazy scene to write because I was like is this seriously dramatic and how do i get this right to be realistic enough that it's not downright ridiculous - i think the magic from the dreams helps. I also wanted jenny realise how much james loves her! And also - who says it can't be both ;)

You know, this is so contradictory, but I'm loving the reaction Jen's getting right now lmao. everyone is so annoyed with her!!! And I love it!! Even her friends are annoyed with her! barring freddie who empathises and is feeling slightly alienated from Moody James so is gravitating towards her (like I feel like some bits of her friendship with Luke hints that he's irritated with her aswell? no? maybe just me picking up on my subtle hints that i'm not making not-subtle enough?) But yeah - she was a hypocrite and it's going to bite her in the a** big time.

LOL that's fine - love brutal honestly - but thank you so much!! I feel like this chapter was like the chapter before the new beginning. I updated the first chapter so it says "Part One: Darkness" and this is kind of gearing towards Part Two ...

Thank you for reviewing!!! I'll keep writing just to see which chapter makes you want to review again! Just kidding lolol. Also ... Jenny showing James some affection ... what an interesting idea ... it's like you've gone and read ahead ... and lol your conviction about Moss. Also love it. Supremely.

Happy new year!! xxx Plum


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