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Review:TheTenthWeasley says:
You're so welcome and thank you for letting me help :) I really enjoyed it, and it definitely wasn't a mess lol.

Anyway, this will be shorter than usual because you know most of my thoughts on this chapter already. It all flows really well and I found everything just as funny this time as I did the last time I read it.

I loved what you've added towards the end. The backstory on Jenny and Dom's friendship was a really clever move, it makes us all hate Dom more, and it still makes her character fascinating to me. What is wrong with her, what goes through her head, why does everyone love her despite her pretty terrible behaviour? Again, I so love Jenny's inner dialogue, I get so invested in her and her feelings and it adds an extra dimension when other characters point out her flaws; I forget too that I'm biased towards her due to first-person perspective and it's so great that she's an interesting character that actually /has/ flaws. The James/Jenny fight was sad, necessary, frustrating, well written as usual.

Happy holidays, see you soon xx

Author's Response: Thank you so so so much for helping! I seriously can't thank you enough. Your thoughts literally gave me so much inspiration and changed the course of this whole story LOL so thank you!!!

Thank you!!! I'm glad you liked it! I wanted to end it before then because - the word count. But I felt like both things needed to be done - the break up and a little more fleshing out of Dom. Dom is such a real person to me - girls like that have filtered in and out of my life but GOD for the life of me I still don't know why or how people like mean people just because they're hot. I def wanted to explore that idea a bit more - like the girls in Jen's dorm still like her more than Jenny (even if they found out what Dom did I think they'd like her, if only to be part of her budding fame, etc. and attached popularity).

Thank you for leaving a review on this despite already letting me know your thoughts! I can't wait to read what you think about the next chapter.

THANK YOU INTERNET ANGEL xxx


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