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Review:Eyo says:
Damn poor James,

I feel so bad for him, heís like the ball which felt in the street and that everyone kick until itís destroyed. Really at this point I guess he will forfeit soon.

This chapter brought the crazyness of Hogwart to an other level. Jenny is putting the unnecessary drama quite high. It was pretty funny to see this chapter where sheís becoming totally crazy. Actually at one point I though she was going to have a bad accident during potion.
Also it was funny how you put Jenny being upset to everyone for something sheís doing herself to everyone else, though I have to say I feel a bit sorry that you make her such a bi***. Criticizing James for not being able to understand the mistakes he did when sheís doing literally the exact same thing to him, and the others.

Nicely done for explaining a bit more Domís character. Yeah she fit the profile and brining that to the feelings she had for Luke was quite nice, such a small thing went to such a big thing.

Iím not a big fan of Moss but obviously liking James a lo, there is no way I can like his remplacement I guess. Maybe I will like him later on for now itís a bit hard to understand him, easy to anger, fearful and good student he actually looks like a pretty realistic high school boy.

Freddy is a bit passive at the moment, Iím really surprise the Wotter clan isnít brought by him. I mean one of them actually used a confondu so charm on her friend. After all if the press were to learn about it. That would be catastrophic for the whole clan ( i guess we speak about being kick out from Hogwarts here ).

This chapter was nice, heretic but nice! I feel like I learn a lot about Jenny, extremely childish right now. This is also the turn off for her relantionship with James and I feel like you did it nicely ( Iím guessing that from the change in the summary, the title and well this whole chapter ) there is a limit Tom what someone can support Andy I guess James reached this limit. Very nicely done though the last scene, having Jenny enlighten positive sides of him until the last moment I was hoping. It also shows the paradox which I guess none of us can understand.

I hope you will continue to develop him though, maybe his next relatiomship. Not simply stating what he does because I have to say heís my favorite char in this FIC and knowing they wonít finish together was sad but well atleast itís orignal and I will not drop your story for that. Well donít forget him though I love him :)

Thank you for this wonderful but hearthbroken chapter. I will see you on your next chapter.

Ps: everyone is so crazy I wouldnít be surprise if Hogwarts was under a spell.

Author's Response: I know poor James :( he really is so confused and just wants to be with Jenelle so badly but I definitely think his emotions are out of whack because of the Dream he had.

Hahaha yes Jenelle's emotions are ALSO out of whack and its manifesting differently - James is having panic attacks and Jenny is becoming destructive. Yeah, Jenny definitely has a lot of growing up to do - and Moss just irritates her in the most impossible way. She just can't justify giving into her emotions and make it easier for everyone by getting back together. She's fighting her emotions and it's making her crazy.

Thank you! I wanted to flesh Dom a bit more so we can see what she's like as person a bit more. She's always been dramatic and insane - it's just never backfired so horrifically before.

Moss is such a curve ball! He is so unlike James but also have so many similarities ... but IS he a replacement ...? We shall see ;) LOL.

Oh god - no good think McGonagall would never allow press to get into Hogwarts or even around it.

Thank you! But yeah - I'm realising changing the chapter summary was quite confusing so I've changed it again lol. Because while J+J seem unlikely NOW ... things can change ;) But no! Keep having hope! This story isn't over yet and there's so much left in store for these two you have no idea!

I'm so glad you love James and that he's your favourite character! I can't wait to write him more! Aw thank you Eyo, i'm really happy you still want to stick to this story even though James may not be at the centre of it right now. I won't forget you love him!!

Aw, thank you for this lovely and kind review. I can't wait to hear your thooughts on the next chapter and maybe you'll feel better about it!

P.S. LOL I wouldn't be surprised either


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