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Review:astoryending says:
10,000 words, dang! I am honestly so astonished and impressed that you can sprout out this many words consistently!

Jennys development and growth is so so so good. Shes really funny and THE ANGER! This whole chapter brought such a massive grin to my face because shes just so hilarious in it. If I unclench, my nails will jam directly into your eyes and you will bleed to death in this cold dungeon and I will dance on your bones after I've dug them out of your grave and pulverised into ash in front of your weeping mother!' Again THE ANGER!!! is just amazing. That whole scene during potions is totally brill and my favourite in this whole story fo sho. I glared around the dungeons, trying not to hate everyone. Actually laughed out loud at this. Stitches I tell you, stitches!

Jenny really brings it out of Moss though, doesnt she. Hes a really interesting character...

And Freddie, my love, my light. I tell you this everytime I feel like, haha, but I just cant help it because he is the BESTEST! (Hes been dying to talk knobs with Jen, one can just tell ;))

Its easy to just talk about Jenny and her journey from the first chapter, but my my my. James! Im not gonna lie, I was reluctantly iffy about him in the beginning. Such a toolbag. But now hes really trying to get her to forgive him, hes trying to get her to understand how sorry he is and how much he regret everything. And my heart really aches for him (as it does for Jenny too, but for different reasons). This whole thing between them right now, the not realising what your actions will lead to or owning up to them and just not seeing (and understanding) that you yourself is part of the problem, is so flipping relatable and it gives me feels.

And now everything is starting to catch up big time. Its really keeping me on the edge of my seat for the coming chapters and its so exciting!! Although, they seem to be getting further and further away from each other which is making me anxious because I want them to be obnoxiously and ridiculously happy together and they better start gravitating towards that soon! (But I secretly love that they cant get their sht together.)

Wishing you a very Merry Christmas and the happiest of New Years! Xoxo

Author's Response: I KNOW. When I realised it was 10,000 I was like ... what am I even writing LOL how is it THIS long?! But I think after chapter 15, this is going to be a regular thing. There's so much to come I want to make sure everything's in place for all the crazy about to happen.

Ahhh yay!! Hahaha that's one of my fav lines. The potions scene is the one I've been talking about for EONS about being my favourite one!!! I'm so so so happy you loved it!!! Honestly so glad because obv Jenny is spiralling and increasing feeling out of step but I wanted to keep it somewhat light LOL.

She sure does ... I mean, they both bring it out of each other ... but is this classic fanfic sexual tension as Freddie dreams it is? Or is it genuine friction of two clashing personalities? Or is that just another way of phrasing sexual tension?! I DON'T KNOW.

LOL I love hearing about how people love Freddie!!! I seriously didn't realise how much people would adore him when I was writing this! I want to keep hearing about it forever.

I think it's so easy to love the characters you already love, you know? But to dislike James and the way he's acting is so contrary in fanfic (especially because even in ones where James and the OC clash and fight and it's the whole enemies to lovers thing he's still supremely loved) BUT IT IS SO REAL. Like, just because someone's hot does not make what they do okay. Ever. But obviously that's not why James was acting the way he was - he was hurt and wanted to hurt Jenny back (not good) and it's hard to swallow for Jenny that now that he realises he was wrong that he wants her to forgive him. She almost feels like she doesn't owe him that. But she sees how much he regrets everything and she can't ignore how SHE feels so ... will she soften up??

I love that you think this story is exciting!! I don't know why - I just do! I hope I'm keeping the momentum going because there will be a point where romance starts to mix with action/adventure so can't wait!

Thank you for reviewing love!


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