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I was extremely excited to read this updated chapter; it truly felt like forever since I'd seen this story!

This episode was absolutely brilliant just like every other chapter yet it was so heart-breaking. I completely understand as to why Jenny is so upset however I don't think she actually realises how much unnecessary drama her actions have caused. Nevertheless, she has faced so much conflict in such a short amount of time that I can understand why everything seems so confusing and unclear right now. Preferably, she will be able to regain control over her life.

I honestly feel very sorry for James, you can see that he does regret everything he has done so far. The pain he feels is also quite visible, having broken up with Clarke for no reason, he effectively ruined their entire relationship. It is quite obvious that he tries to hide his insecurities behind an arrogant exterior since he struggles to express his feelings effectively. Over the last couple chapters, seeing him make such a large effort towards rebuilding his relationship; it's honestly extremely sweet.

In all truthfulness at this current moment; my favourite character is definitely Freddie. He brings comedy to a bad situation yet is also serious and compassionate towards Jenny.

Naturally, I don't know how to feel about Dom because frankly, she is currently an awful person. Her reasoning for her actions was pathetic and seeing Jenelle reflect on their relationship shows that it was an awful friendship.

Hopefully, all of their lives get better soon! Also, a quick question since you changed the description of your story; are James/Clarke highly unlikely or is it something else? Thank you so much for another amazing chapter and please update as soon as possible!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm usually quite quick with updates so taking a month was long even for me LOL.

And quickly, before i begin, episode!!! I don't know if you meant to say that but I LOVE IT hahaha. I think of these chapters like episodes too.

You're absolutely right. Jenny is a total hypocrite and I think we can say that with certainty. She's angry and upset that they broke up over nothing, that James would believe a lie (even if she'd been Confunded to make the lie believable) and throw her away without having a conversation. Asking Moss out will have an inevitable ripple effect, just like James breaking up with Jenny. It's just so hard for her to accept that she could've reacted the same way if the roles were reversed, you know? She think she wouldn't have and that gives her the moral high ground—but how could she possibly know that for sure? James is as invested in their relationship as she was. But as much as we want to see them sort this out, she needs to sort herself out and realise she's imperfect and work on being better (we'll see that doesn't exactly go accordingly to plan—but in a way I think will make some of you VERY happy lol).

YES. James is such an interesting guy. A kind of everyman. He's usually very easygoing and happy (which has been hinted at but we haven't actually seen) and he thinks he's clear when he talks about he feels so gets frustrated when Jenny doesn't seem to get it (this is true for Jen too). But he IS trying to so hard. He knows how devastating his mistake was but he also can reason that Dom played a huge role. She's his cousin, someone he had no reason not to trust or think that she wouldn't have his best interest at heart—or at the very least, not go out of her way to hurt him. It's a very complicated situation that James understands but which Jenny wants to force into black and white.

Freddie is a common favourite and I love that so much! He's literally Jenny's conscience and always plays the devil's advocate.

YUP. Sometimes people who are good can make bad decisions based on even worse excuses because people are complicated and incomprehensible. We don't honestly know much about Dom/her life/why she is the way she is but still, it can be a very "cool motive, still murder" kind of situation. Dom will have to really redeem herself.

I think the next two or three chapters will stabilise things for everyone but that doesn't mean that it necessarily gets better lol. Cruel, but true.

And omg no, I feel like the description change kind of made things confusing which I'm sorry about! I just changed it up again so it's not misleading. I wrote that to mean that at this point it seemed highly unlikely but that just wasn't true to the story so it's gone!

Thank you so much for your wonderful review! I really loved reading it :) I hope you enjoyed chapter 15! 16 will come as soon as it's ready!

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