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Review:anon says:
I love that Moss no matter how secretly attractive he finds janelle, knows that james is badass enough to completely ruin his life if he did go on this date
part of me hopes james finds about janelle's rowdy unpredictable tendencies but i want them to make it up although i think its important the process towards it is right
have you got many plans for the plot? or how long this will be
you have done such a lovely job with this i can't explain how much i adore your characterisation of james ive been waiting so long to find a james like this
can't wait for the following chapters

Author's Response: Hi! Hahahaha so true. James has created quite a reputation and probably has no idea how it's happened.

Yeah absolutely I feel like they need to settle their inner madness before they can truly make it up and I have a feeling Jenny's impulsivity will catch up to her...

I do! I have so many things planned for the characters and their arcs and how things will be resolved in the end and I didn't realise it would be quite as long as it's turning out (although, it IS only 13 chapters so far and I had a feeling it would be around 30-35). I'm still aiming for around 30-35, like hopefully I finish the story by then. It might be shorter than that though!

Thank you so so much! I've got a big fat grin on my face reading that so thank you!! I'm so glad you're enjoying. I can't wait to hear your thoughts on the next chapter! (which should be coming soon!)

Thank you for this lovely review! P xxx

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